Can you guess what these jumbled up words are?
Answers revealed on Tuesday 26th!!
ANSWERS: BECAUSE, FASHION, GARDENER, PIZZA, WINDOW, TOURIST, RESTAURANT AND FOREIGNER!!
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Hi James, I'm learning English,this is my answer : because, restaurent, foreigner, tourist, fashion, gardener,pizza and I used these words to write the passage to introduce myself :)
ReplyDeletePlease help me to check and adjust if I wrote wrong about grammar, words...thank you so much
Hi , my name is Loan . I'm from Viet Nam. I like to explore the new things over the world . I like to travel alone than more tour. Because the cost of a tourist is more expensive than traveler and the time is also not more flexible. On free time, I often read book, listen to music and sometime help my father to care flowers and decorative plants such as watering, fertilizing, pruning, I think I'm a good gardener :). I also like the other girls love fashion. At weekend I and some friends often go to shopping mall, there are many the big fashion brands which is very style, luxury and also really expensive.Sometime we just go window shopping to saticfy the eyes :)).After shopping, we will go to the restaurant. Pizza is the fast food that we love but we don't eat it much because we are very afraid of fat :)) .I am a young girl, active, enthusiatic and I would love to communicate with other people ,especially foreigners . This helps me not only improving my English skills but also widening my knowledge.
Hi Loan, thank you very much for your wonderful comment. I have taken some time to respond to you so you can have a detailed response that will help you. As you can see from my answers, you were indeed correct. Your paragraph was very well thought of and shows that you a have a great understanding of English. Read my response to your paragraph below to see how I would have worded some of your sentences.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is James and I'm from England. I enjoy exploring new things and places and currently traveling around Asia. I also like to travel alone rather than pay for tours as they are very expensive. I find traveling much more cost effective and enjoyable when I am on my own because I am able to do what I want, when I want. It is a lot more flexible. During my free time, I go to the gym to weight train. I do this most days as I enjoy pushing my body to the next level. I listen to great music to help me feel motivated and one track that I really like is 'Disturbed.' After the gym, I often go the restaurant for something to eat. This is usually Indian food (as I live in Asia). Although, I try not to eat this kind of food too much as it's not healthy and can cause weight gain.
I love being a teacher and really enjoy helping others learn English. I really enjoyed your sentence about going 'window shopping to satisfy the eyes!' haha ;) It's great to see you adding humour to your writing. This is something that many students find difficult to do.
If you need more help learning English, please feel free to email me or continue completing my challenges and reading my posts. I will always respond to your comments the best that I can.
I hope this has helped you.
Thanks again
James
Hi James, I am very glad to read your reply. It's very helpful for me.You know, my problem when I learn English that's my pronounciation. That's terrible and I don't feel confident to talk with others. I also improve it by listening many the English conversation lesstions but the problem is my voice , my tongue I think. Would you like to show me some ways to improve it. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteYou and me also like to travel alone And you like to travel around Asia. I am looking foward to seeing you soon in VietNam. Don't hesitate contact me when you come Vietnam :)))